Show not tell

We are learning to describe a moment in time.


My friend andy told me she had a surprise for me i was abit nervous because i didn't know what we were doing i  to her as long as we weren't going rock climbing i would go she said that we were not rock climbing that made me relax a bit until we're almost there we were in a forest and i heard people squealing and then I knew that we were tree climbing i was so angry and andy and told her to drive back but she said that she had already paid for it so i had to to do it i decided that i would just climb the tree it can't be that high up then we pulled into the carpark a i sore massive trees and the trees were really skinny and tiny little ropes that were breaking and where was no net underneath it and nothing to hold us up the wind was blowing and i was shaking like crazy we went up to the lady that was running this thing and we got us to sine this thing that made sore that we would not show them we send it and i climbed up a old rusty later and got stepped onto the type rope i was shaking like crazy and i know if i had fell that i would break my neck or leg or something. i took my second steep and almost fell i talk my there'd steep and i fell down to the bottom of the “crack” my arm broke I yelled out and my eyes started to tear up and started to cry . then a man came over and told me to get up and come with me. Rod I thought but i didn't say anything and just followed him he took me to a desk and ask me if it is bleeding and i said no it is broken and then man said then what's the problem. What the problem my arm is broken then he man just wrapped it up in wet toilet paper andy made it across and i told her that i needed to go to the hospital then you are taking me home.

Two word poem

two word poem

\ Age /

Year 7

11 years old

\ Favourite movie /

Loves Star Wars

Loves The Lodge

\ Likes to /

Play games

Watching youtube

 Sleeping

Run

Write

\ Hates/

People that hate star wars

Hot days

\ Scared of /

Big dogs

Heights

Horses

Spiders

\ loves /

The rain / could days

\ Pets /

I have no pets

Pet ooks like nothing

Smells like nothing

pet has no spots

pet does nothing

Pet is nothing

\ Brothers and sisters /

Tanesha sister 1

Reilly brother 1

Trent brother 2

Three siblings  

\ Favourite teacher /

Miss D

\ My teacher /

Mrs G

\ Hair /

black hair

Short hair

Have my hair down

\ favourite foods /

Lasagnas

Pizza

ice cream soda

Ice  cream / vanilla

Lemonade

\ Lives /

in The Milky Way

on Planet Earth

in NZ

On West Coast

the seekwell on the lorax

This is what I have done on my sequel  on the lorax.

Sustainability

this term in room 5 we have been learning about sustainability here is a link and some photos for a planning template