Kia Ora Anika, my name is Janaya I go to Red Hill School in Papakura. I read your story. I like how you have added talking with speech marks. Next time before publishing remember to reread and check speeling. Keep writing your story was fun to read.
Hi Anika we are Amelia and Stephanie, we are from Red Hill School, we think your story is very interesting. You could reread it to fix up spelling mistakes, keep writing stories they are really exciting.
Kia Ora Anika, my name is Janaya I go to Red Hill School in Papakura. I read your story. I like how you have added talking with speech marks. Next time before publishing remember to reread and check speeling. Keep writing your story was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Anika we are Amelia and Stephanie, we are from Red Hill School, we think your story is very interesting. You could reread it to fix up spelling mistakes, keep writing stories they are really exciting.
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